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(c) curlynema

character: thedementedlamb

aghhhhhhhhhh.  
so now i figured out that, even when charged my tab;et won't keep the charge..
i started this at 100% and by the time i was done it was at 11% ..
this took about 2 hours..
urgh.

i'm so sorry for the wait, and there are so many lil things i missed, I'm osrry.

i hope you enjoy your commission
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I'm senpai? Holy jhfjdhSDJVAJDHFG 
Uhhh
Okay let's see here. 
First of all I love the design you chose for this guy. Very neat!
Second of all, I think you need to reference your portion sizes. The anatomy isn't that far off from perfection, but I just think it needs a little bit of tweaking. I'm not perfect myself. I notice flaws when I draw things all the time haha.
The left shoulder (spotted one) seems to be a little too far down. The torso itself is fairly stiff and if his shoulders were really that bent, the torso would be more curved along with it. 
The left arm (with the blue cloth) is just about the perfect length. The right one should be a smidge longer. The feet need to be larger as well. A full foot is about the size of your forearm (from your elbow to your wrist).

I highly recommend doing a "bean" exercise when it  comes to poses. Especially if you're looking for something a little more dynamic. I'll link you to some sources. This practice has helped me in my life drawing classes more than you know. 

These are the EXACT videos we watched in my college course. Please watch them. They will teach you everything you need to know. If you watch them in order and practice them, you will improve greatly within a few hours!

Please watch them in order <3
Here's the playlist:
www.youtube.com/playlist?list=…

I hope this helps! Have a great one <3